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Old August 3rd, 2005 #2
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Default "Unpaid Debt" by TOL

"Unpaid Debt" by TOL
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"Hey nigger, eat THIS," I said, as I unloaded five blasts from my pump shotgun into his face. Satisfied, I calmly got into my Porsche and drove away, even as the street nigger's splattered brains ran drippily down the alley wall into the gutter, the same gutter where my kid sister's blood had run five years ago, after she'd been savagely raped and murdered.

No, it wasn't the same nigger who had killed her. But one dead nigger was just as good as another, I thought, as I sped away into the night. And next week I'd get me another one. And then another. And then another....because even a million dead niggers would never settle the debt for me - never.

Lighting up a Marlboro, I drove on into the cool night, towards home, far beyond the wailing police sirens behind me.